PIT_FACE at 5:24AM, Aug. 26, 2011

and corntown, i commend you on your reaction to our review!

PIT_FACE at 5:24AM, Aug. 26, 2011

pleasure doin business with ya Geney!

Genejoke at 2:47PM, Aug. 25, 2011

@Asbin, I did intend to skank bones up a but time got away from me. @Corntown, no need to apologise about the length of post.

CornTown at 10:34AM, Aug. 25, 2011

Thank you for the review. I'm glad you liked the comic (Parts of it at least). I think you guys are right about the art. This is especially true of the photo backgrounds which I've been drawing by hand again on the new pages. The comic is blatantly sexist because every single manga I've ever read hates women. It's usually very subtile, so in Duke I wanted to make it as obvious as possible. The worst thing however is that many comics marketed to young boys will use the exact same plotline of the first chapter. Where the boy gets the girl by saving her from being raped. In terms of being a parody, I've always felt that a good satire should be able to masquerade itself as the object that it seeks to parody. I'm disappointed that I was unable to covey this message and I'm going to have to rethink my approach in later chapters. Sorry about this post being so long. I'm very grateful for your feedback and I was wondering if I could post this review on my website. Jacob Gray

Asbin at 9:44AM, Aug. 25, 2011

Wow, bones got in shape and got all clean and groomed up Makes him look even more like Dave Mustaine

bravo1102 at 6:31AM, Aug. 25, 2011

Well done review. Love those two guys.

El Cid at 6:00AM, Aug. 25, 2011

Haven't read this one, but it's true that sometimes weak parodies run the risk of becoming the thing they're trying to make fun of.

plymayer at 1:28AM, Aug. 25, 2011

Congratulations on be spotlighted on the main page ;)

jerrie at 1:10AM, Aug. 25, 2011

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