Security breach 4/7

Genejoke on Feb. 28, 2012

Despite what was mentioned before it doesn't look as though Lite bites will slow down as much as I thought, it will be slowing down though. After this story we have something that may surprise some people. The next couple of reviews are slightly delayed but are coming. These are reviews of “If I get locked up tonite” and “The Garden” it will be week or two before they begin to appear.

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man in black at 6:50PM, Feb. 28, 2012

great page

Jamie59 at 6:49PM, Feb. 28, 2012

shastab24 at 4:22PM, Feb. 28, 2012

And my lack of placing a curse word in the original script likely stems from the fact that I don't cuss, myself, and a lot of my dialogue comes from how I would say it. A lot of people find it odd, but it's my decision (though it's funny when people find out and then think I don't want them to cuss around me, which is not the case).

bravo1102 at 9:04AM, Feb. 28, 2012

I did the research so why not share the fruits of it with the audience? I've studied and drawn historical costume since I was little so I decided to set the story in the 18th Century since it was a time where this sort of thing could happen.

Banes at 8:52AM, Feb. 28, 2012

wow! excellent! this shit is compelling!

jerrie at 8:49AM, Feb. 28, 2012

El Cid at 5:37AM, Feb. 28, 2012

Bravo, I like how you educate as you entertain!

bravo1102 at 1:52AM, Feb. 28, 2012

One change I suggested was to turn "crap" into "shit" because "shit" has such a long and glorious history. A costume note, the dye in the security chief's plume is bleeding in the rain. Lots of the more expensive dyes would bleed in the rain back in the 18th Century and could quickly turn the richest clothing into rags.

Security breach 4/7

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