Chaos Room Page Three

Genejoke on Sept. 7, 2023

Written by Shastab24

https://www.theduckwebcomics.com/user/shastab24/

https://almightyprotectors.thecomicseries.com/

Art by Genejoke

I'm sure some of you will remember Shastab24 as a regular contributor from the original run of Lite bites.

One reading this script I immediately dropped what I was working on and got to work on it.

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shastab24 at 2:18AM, Sept. 7, 2023

One of the interesting aspects about this bit: finding a way to logically script a bit that was in the narration but would be hard to indicate in a comic. Like the humming. In the original prose, it was just described as she describes it in her thoughts here. I had to make her think it because I didn't want a narrator. I should also note, the character descriptions were never given, so character designs are all Genejoke's. Also, with the three-word challenge that I created this story under, this page shows the last bit: ice cream. I remain impressed with how well I was able to write something so quickly. But I guess sometimes your best work is under time constraints/is your throwaway idea. Not saying it's a masterpiece, but I think it's some of my better work.

shastab24 at 5:08AM, Sept. 7, 2023

So, this site still doesn't recognize line breaks in comments. Fun. That was supposed to have some, because it feels like some sort of disjointed line of thought the way it was posted.

Othosmops at 12:51AM, Sept. 7, 2023

Oh. A self-awareness trip! Go out and recover the brooch.

plymayer at 12:26AM, Sept. 7, 2023

It's not often one finds themselves. If, that who the younger lady is.

bravo1102 at 12:15AM, Sept. 7, 2023

Memories.