Without moonlight REview page six

Genejoke on Oct. 3, 2012

And so we're done, this almost ended up being seven pages but my recent return to work has limited my time a little, and it would have been a little drawn out as well. So we have a slightly abrupt ending but i think all the key points have been covered. Somethign seems lacking though, maybe it's the lack of a jokey punchline… dunno. My closing line seems to lack a little something but Eschuteons line summed things up so well, perhaps i should have closed with that. sigh.

Anyway, link time.

The comic under the knife has been Without moonlight and it can be found here, go on give it a look.
http://www.drunkduck.com/Without_Moonlight/

STavlov appears from BASO and there is a picture link down to the left.

Angie appears from Deathp*rn and that also has a link down to the left.

Megi appears courtesy of Dueling heroes by Escutcheon.
http://www.drunkduck.com/Dueling_Heroes/

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Genejoke at 1:01PM, Oct. 3, 2012

Woo hoo.

Tantz_Aerine at 10:55AM, Oct. 3, 2012

Okay my mum read this review from start to finish and she really liked how you guys grasped exactly what my comic is trying to do! BTW she said it was normal for you not to be able to connect the Greek names to the characters, as they ARE Greek after all! She also said she loved the 3-D characters and the whole set up of the review Genejoke so that's kudos to you actually :) And my mum's not easy to get an applause from, she's scarce as hell with praise, and knows her stuff far more than me ;) So great job from her and a thanks for me, for revisiting and doing this right :)

Tantz_Aerine at 10:23AM, Oct. 3, 2012

What is missing is the relatively equal-parts-clashing in a straightforward melee I think, which is what we're ok with reading emotionally much more. Unfortunately stories about occupations just have all the wrongs of war and none of the excitement. And I am very glad that I have succeeded so well in portraying that, that WM punches in the guts so much. :D That was the idea.

bravo1102 at 9:18AM, Oct. 3, 2012

One of these days I got to try doing the thoughtful war drama that El Cid is looking for. Stories about resistance and occupation aren't the same as many other war dramas so in many ways there is something missing as opposed to stories about combatants as opposed to those caught in the crossfire. But as a story about civilians under occupation Without Moonlight definite is worth reading.

Genejoke at 7:24AM, Oct. 3, 2012

AAAAnd... I'm looking for another co reviewer for the next review... well not the next one as the next two are just about complete but the one after that. any volunteers?

Genejoke at 6:37AM, Oct. 3, 2012

Oh and tomorrow we have another third panel Yoda and there are a couple more reviews coming real soon.

Genejoke at 6:34AM, Oct. 3, 2012

Oh thr lack of sound fx is due to the page being a bit cluttered.

Genejoke at 6:34AM, Oct. 3, 2012

Oh thr lack of sound fx is due to the page being a bit cluttered.

Without moonlight REview page six

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