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Character development review 2/3

Genejoke on May 26, 2014

http://www.theduckwebcomics.com/Character_Development/Character development is taking a break at present but I believe Gunwallace will ressurect it sooner or later, even so it has a mammoth amount of pages.Also check out Gunwallaces current comic All unicorns to battle stations.http://www.theduckwebcomics.com/All_Unicorns_to_Battle_Stations/The reviewers areDavin from Lorehttp://www.theduckwebcomics.com/Lore/Angie from Death p*rnhttp://www.theduckwebcomics.com/Death_P0rn/Supertrans from Supertranshttp://supertrans.thecomicseries.com/
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Gunwallace at 1:16PM, May 27, 2014

Good criticisms. I really let the whole story get out of control early on, and often ended up writing or re-writing the page the day it was posted. Long-term goals for some characters just got washed away in the silliness, and the whole thing became an out-of-control train wreck of a plot with more trains piling in periodically. Still, I had fun.

Genejoke at 11:15PM, May 26, 2014

@el cid, he would echo the paladin but not a perfect fit by any stretch of the imagination.

Genejoke at 11:13PM, May 26, 2014

Haha! Yeah shastab24 I use a lot of it. Some I have had to cut as you made so many great points.

El Cid at 5:00PM, May 26, 2014

I wonder which character Davin would be if they did a CG version of "Character Development?"

shastab24 at 3:56PM, May 26, 2014

Look at that, my lengthy message to Genejoke as my part of the critique rears its head. Look at all that text.

bravo1102 at 7:54AM, May 26, 2014

Good work.

plymayer at 4:14AM, May 26, 2014

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