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usedbooks on May 3, 2007

Second panel is ugly. I was having trouble with eye proportions… I debated whether I should fill those last three panels with solid black, but I decided to leave them sketchy. I don't know why, but I like it better this way. It feels more chaotic and loose (matching the rest of the art, at least). I guess the world might seem more sketchy with a head injury, anyway… (My world just gets blurry.)

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maritalbliss at 6:40PM, July 6, 2007

I think the last three panels are a nice touch.

Triss at 6:59PM, May 4, 2007

That's a little violent... I may have to read your archives now. o_O

EmilyTheStrange at 3:47AM, May 4, 2007

^_^

NotBob at 1:35AM, May 4, 2007

It's not too bad, I've seen far worse. In fact it does seem to fit with the plot. Last time I was knocked out things came back a little sketchily.

Kristen Gudsnuk at 12:37AM, May 4, 2007

yeah I like the last 3 panels all sketchy, it flows better with your art style (which is pretty sketchy.) uhh not sketchy in the creepy way... in the literal way, hehe he!

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