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usedbooks on April 28, 2010
For those who may have forgotten, the keys came from here.
Originally, I hadn't scripted any dialogue for this page, which made it moody, but it set the wrong mood. It made Seiko seem too sure of herself. While she is determined, I felt it was important to script out the thinking here to show her motives. As always, the quest is for answers not really “rescue” at this point.
–Eep. I just realized I used the less common spelling of “recognize.” Since I already changed this page four times, I'm leaving it. (I'll pretend it's a deliberate nod to my sister, who is visiting London. ~_^ )
ghostrunner: Not quite. ;)
DAJB: Sort of, though possibly unintentional.
blntmaker: The keys aren't from him, and it seems he might not have recognized them. Sometimes they get lucky.
Tantz: Thanks! There are a lot of inner musings for the next few pages that weren't in my original script, but they really hold everything together, imo.
amanda: Raidon's decor is always fun to research and draw. XD He likely wouldn't “plant” car keys on her, since she has no license. I mean, it could happen, but these are Celes's keys.
Peipei: She already had the keys but didn't come with a car or anything, so Raidon had no real reason to confiscate them I guess. (Apparently doesn't recognize his own keys…)
JNP: I didn't deliberately change anything but nose shapes. ^_^; So, it's interesting that other things have changed unconsciously… Men always get caught. Poor fellas. At least ladies are polite not to point it out. XD
LanceDanger: The phone maybe, but the keys are luck.
Kaida_Shibata at 7:37PM, May 3, 2010
HEhehe Lily *snort* that is too funny! I miss Fudo! =^_^=
blntmaker at 8:25PM, April 29, 2010
Oh, okay! HAHAHAHAHA @ buckling her seat belt. I really love the way Seiko's character has developed.
JustNoPoint at 6:34PM, April 29, 2010
Liking the musings! Something about characters trying to put pieces together in their mind is really interesting to see every time.
Peipei at 6:46AM, April 29, 2010
He let her leave o_o? There's gotta be something more to this, like a framing in the works or something D:.
amanda at 4:57AM, April 29, 2010
How did she get out of there without Raidon knowing? Surely he expected her to leave?
DAJB at 11:27PM, April 28, 2010
Lily?! Poor Hecate would be mortified! ;-) Ooh, and just think what mischief she could do with Celes's car! Don't just take it, girl - wreck it good and proper!
Tantz_Aerine at 10:59PM, April 28, 2010
Go Seiko, that's the attitude! But now I'm worried that is may actually be dead... or dying... :( Maybe Fudo helps and so Kaida warms up to him again. ... hm ... And musings always help keep a story together ;)
Anubis at 10:10PM, April 28, 2010
never trust a death notice till you see a corpse
LanceDanger at 10:07PM, April 28, 2010
Go, Seikop, go! =3
ghostrunner at 10:07PM, April 28, 2010
thought is important XD