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usedbooks on April 3, 2017
I like how this page turned out. There's not much to it, I guess, but the layout ended up working nicely with the pacing, and the characters' expressions are on-point. I hope the reading order makes sense. (Read all the way down on the left first.)
I cut quite a bit of dialogue from the original script and a few additional gestures and things – innuendo. But I think I managed to capture the spirit of it enough for Tristan's reaction to make sense.
Peipei at 11:09PM, April 3, 2017
I wouldn't trust these guys, even if they are trying to go 'buddy buddy' on them all of a sudden. Tristan is right to be wary xD!
usedbooks at 9:34AM, April 4, 2017
True. Tristan and Sean should remain guarded.
KimLuster at 6:12AM, April 3, 2017
These are some good-looking criminals!!
usedbooks at 9:36AM, April 4, 2017
Lol. This was a tricky group of character designs for me. I'm not accostomed to designing a group without a female among them.
LanceDanger at 5:22AM, April 3, 2017
lol at Tristan's reaction XD
usedbooks at 9:37AM, April 4, 2017
XD
plymayer at 12:44AM, April 3, 2017
Okay next we hand out the secret decoder rings and wrist watch walkie talkies (with logo on them).
usedbooks at 9:37AM, April 4, 2017
No gurlz allowed!