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bravo1102 at 5:27AM, April 11, 2012
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Frontier: 2170 Really nice and clean artwork, however I really question the use of footnotes in a comic.  It interferes with the flow of the comic first with readers not knowing what the phrases mean and subsequent search for the location of the notes.  Since they are simple phrases just have the characters use that simple phrase.   Good idea to avoid awkwardly crossing speech balloons.  This is a fault of mine so I'm doubly sensitive to it.

Battle of the Robofemoids The grey Gals are at work in their laboratory and an oblique reference to what Theda did before getting involved with Robofemoids.  This may be the last update for quite a while.
Escutcheon at 9:12PM, April 11, 2012
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Battle of the Robofemoids once again is quite amusing- I love the way the characters come ever so close to breaking that fourth wall by questioning the strength of the background- when to the reader it would appear so weak. The characters have strong personality and I love the fact that I can actually feel the mood when Theda has a quick, yet innocuous retort. Very good stuff!
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This week, Scareflare's investigation in Dueling Heroes (http://www.drunkduck.com/Dueling_Heroes ) explodes into a climax as inspiration strikes the hotheaded crimefighter. Time is running out as he finds himself not only outnumbered- but quite possibly outmatched by powers beyond his control.
Tantz Aerine at 10:11AM, April 12, 2012
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For Dueling Heroes: You manage to give a dynamic of action and intensity despite the extreme sketchiness of your design, and the emotions jump out at the reader immediately! Also love the last panel, it is really unexpected and fun. XD Well done! 

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Without Moonlight updates today with the two top dog SS officers in the Athens gestapo discussing results from the block.  
 
kyupol at 8:14PM, April 12, 2012
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Re:  Without Moonlight
- Nice dialog.  Also, your backgrounds are very good.  :)
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MAG-ISA updates today.  We get to see a talking head. 
http://www.drunkduck.com/MAG_ISA/5388643/
NOW UPDATING!!!
mangaka2170 at 11:38AM, April 13, 2012
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Again, nice lineart and beautiful shading in MAG ISA. Keep it up!

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In this update of Frontier: 2170, let there be light…
Read Frontier:  2170 here (updates Tuesdays and Fridays)
D Comix at 5:59PM, April 13, 2012
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@mangaka2170 I read Frontier: 2170 before and again I really like the inking on it.  Keep it up!
 
Today in Mad Chicken Auto, Manny sees something really exciting..come see for yourself!
Freedom Fighters (Ongoing)
Skooland (Updates Mondays and Fridays)
Mad Chicken Auto (On Temporary hiatus)
 
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Genejoke at 1:37AM, April 16, 2012
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Your art is very nice for all its simplicity, you're improving quite rapidly.
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In BASO Stavlov runs into a little trouble.
http://www.drunkduck.com/BASO/
Also In lite bites we have a funeral service for a hedgehog.  really.
http://www.drunkduck.com/Lite_bites/
kyupol at 3:52PM, April 16, 2012
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@Baso - nice fight scene the past few pages.  And bottom panel… he could have just said what the f____ lol
@Lite Bites - sad story… of burying Sarah the hedgehog… :(
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MAG-ISA
http://www.drunkduck.com/MAG_ISA/5389015/
- Eman's floating head addresses the shady, shadowy elite…
NOW UPDATING!!!
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D Comix at 5:51PM, April 16, 2012
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@kyupol I read this comic before and your art is nice as well as the story, and pretty nasty demons you got there.  Though, I read chapter one, but I saw the latest page and I gotta say the wireframe thing is pretty cool.
 
Today in Mad Chicken, a lot sorta happens though there's no diologue.
Freedom Fighters (Ongoing)
Skooland (Updates Mondays and Fridays)
Mad Chicken Auto (On Temporary hiatus)
 
luigifontilla at 9:43AM, April 17, 2012
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The story is fun and interesting and even if almost everything is not inked it ws still nice to read.
luigifontilla at 9:44AM, April 17, 2012
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The story is fun and interesting and even if almost everything is not inked it ws still nice to read.
luigifontilla at 9:44AM, April 17, 2012
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The story is fun and interesting and even if almost everything is not inked it ws still nice to read.
luigifontilla at 9:49AM, April 17, 2012
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The story is fun and interesting and even if almost everything is not inked it ws still nice to read.
luigifontilla at 9:49AM, April 17, 2012
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The story is fun and interesting and even if almost everything is not inked it ws still nice to read.
luigifontilla at 9:49AM, April 17, 2012
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The story is fun and interesting and even if almost everything is not inked it ws still nice to read.
luigifontilla at 9:51AM, April 17, 2012
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The story is fun and interesting and even if almost everything is not inked it ws still nice to read.
luigifontilla at 9:51AM, April 17, 2012
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The story is fun and interesting and even if almost everything is not inked it ws still nice to read.
mangaka2170 at 11:08AM, April 17, 2012
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Well, the artwork in your latest update of “The Adventures of Fred and Lassie” isn't bad.  You might want to work on your figure drawing (especially joints), and your writing could do with improvement, but I'd say you're off to a decent start.  Just remember to follow the rules and mention your own comic at the end, ideally with a link; most people won't want to have to go looking through your profile to find your comic.  Also, it isn't polite to multiple-post.
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In this update of Frontier:  2170, you know it's a bad sign when the traffic controller invokes national security…
Read Frontier:  2170 here (updates Tuesdays and Fridays)
Tantz Aerine at 5:40PM, April 17, 2012
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For Frontier: The use of greyscale really fits this comic, and I really liked the way the stuffy lines from control made me sneer along with making the fellow indignant. Well done! 


Without Moonlight updates today, with Eichel giving orders to Bohm about reprisals.  
 
Escutcheon at 9:25PM, April 17, 2012
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Without Moonlight shines once again- the villains don't just seem scary- they're vicious, vile and cruel. Great work with them- they have that level of cruelty, yet have not passed into that silly level of villainy where they lack realism. Villains are often my favorite part of comics, so I have to say once again, great job!
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In Dueling Heroes this week (Now with banner button!), we turn from Scareflare to Effex, to find out just what he's after- but has he taken a bite more than he can chew?
kyupol at 8:26PM, April 19, 2012
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@Dueling Heroes
- decent poses.  some potential in here.
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MAG-ISA updates today… with a little explanation of things…
http://www.drunkduck.com/MAG_ISA/5389574/
NOW UPDATING!!!
mangaka2170 at 10:38AM, April 20, 2012
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Those wireframes are pretty cool, and the lineart and shading are top-notch as always.  Keep it up!
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In this update of Frontier:  2170:  Meanwhile, back in the present…
Read Frontier:  2170 here (updates Tuesdays and Fridays)
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D Comix at 5:35PM, April 20, 2012
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As I read on in Frontier, the story gets more exciting with new events and people popping up.  I also noticed how you put lighting effects when a ship is active it sorta gives it a little realism.
 
Today in Mad Chicken, Manny is going to have some fun pretty soon.
Freedom Fighters (Ongoing)
Skooland (Updates Mondays and Fridays)
Mad Chicken Auto (On Temporary hiatus)
 
mangaka2170 at 10:44AM, April 24, 2012
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The artwork's much cleaner than the last time I checked, although I still advise inking in your lineart so you can get a better contrast with the paper.  Other than that, I suggest you pay more attention to your grammar; there are a few commas missing in your dialogue.
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In this update of Frontier:  2170, something's not right about this… 
Read Frontier:  2170 here (updates Tuesdays and Fridays)
Genejoke at 11:26PM, April 24, 2012
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I really should read the archives of this one as cit's right up my street.  Good job on the vehicles.
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In B.A.S.O. Stavlov comes to and finds…   well read it and find out.
http://www.drunkduck.com/BASO/
bravo1102 at 12:40AM, April 25, 2012
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Great shadow within shadow work in that chamber.  I love the guy coming to with the gloating bad guy saying “wakey, wakey”  Really fabulous work.
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And in Battle of the Robofemoids we meet the Aordians and discover that off of Earth it is harder to find a good man than one would think. 
http://www.drunkduck.com/Battle_of_the_Robofemoids/5389998/
Escutcheon at 10:18PM, April 25, 2012
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Bravo, I love how even within a few panels, there is so much flavor from your characters. With statistics like that for these newcomers, I have a feeling that there's a fight brewing. Great job, I absolutely love it!
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This week, on Dueling Heroes, Effex may very well have taken a bite more than he can chew- and has been ambushed! It looks our heroes' stalker has stepped it up a level in malevolence!
Genejoke at 11:40PM, April 26, 2012
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Very typical superhero type dialogue.  The long pages are easy in some ways (I use them myself from time to time.) but rarely work quite as wel as a traditionallt laid out comic page.
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In B.A.S.O. we discover a little something about Jonathon.
http://www.drunkduck.com/BASO/
PIT_FACE at 10:44AM, April 27, 2012
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B.A.S.O looks like that “take it up the arse” comment might of been an unfortunate choice of words for him. B.A.S.O can have a sort of cinematic feeling and the facial expresions are very well done on this page, which is something you dont see often with poser programs.
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Putrid Meat- a new chapter starts off and our shark-man in arms, Genral Warhead gets annoyed by Jurius, Exis's grim lookin whatever the fuck ya wanna call him scientist type.
mangaka2170 at 11:30AM, April 27, 2012
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Gotta say, I'm liking the rough watercolor look that Putrid Meat has going there.  I'd suggest you pay more attention to your lettering, though; there were quite a few misspelled words and possibly one or two grammatical errors.
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In this update of Frontier:  2170, the plot thickens (to an almost Silly Putty-like consistency)… 
Read Frontier:  2170 here (updates Tuesdays and Fridays)

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