Tales of Omnizari Review Page One

Genejoke on Jan. 30, 2024

A new review

Tales of Omnizari
https://www.theduckwebcomics.com/Tales_of_Omnizari/

by Memo333

https://www.theduckwebcomics.com/user/memo333/

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bravo1102 at 3:50AM, Jan. 30, 2024

I remember Memo having difficulty with choosing a finish for the art as well as doing new pages rather than finishing previous pages because they wanted to get their comic out there. I see it as a work in progress and that Memo is trying to find a finish they like.

Genejoke at 7:13PM, Jan. 30, 2024

That makes sense, there's a number of aspects that made this a hard comic to review, so we went for a crazy review. i will point out I didn't say the art can be excellent lightly, so hopefully that isn't lost amongst the rest.

skyangel at 12:28AM, Jan. 30, 2024

This sounds kinda harsh but at the same time it's exactly what a review needs to be to have any real value and I praise you guys for that. I haven't read this story so I can't comment on the writing but Memo is clearly a very talented artist and I'm excited by so many of the panels shared here. The variation in artwork actually interests me a lot as it kind of makes the best art pop out more but I'm not sure if this was intentional or just an artist rushing through the boring stuff to get to the panels which really excite them most -I think we are all a bit guilty of that at times! XD I'd love to hear Memo's own explanation for this though

Genejoke at 1:22AM, Jan. 30, 2024

I'd say more but there's 3 more pages of review. but we have tried to balance it.

Genejoke at 1:17AM, Jan. 30, 2024

Yeah, the harshness is something we address later, that and personal preference. Honestly this was a hard one to review.