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usedbooks on July 16, 2013
Hope this isn't a dialogue overload. This is what happens when I get creative and try to fit two pages of script into one. I hought the pacing wasn't right for two pages, and this type of interrogation/discussion is tedious if it goes on too long. Anyway, I decided that it does what it needs to do. Sorry about the weird panel placement as well; it's all I could do to work with dialogue flow. :P
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plymayer: It seems that Jiro is taking over the entire store.
skreem & man in black: Thanks!
Peipei: Not one of Mike's best days. :( (And yet, probably not his worst either.)
ghostrunner: Too true.
Peipei at 10:40PM, July 16, 2013
I have a feeling he's about to become a suspect in this case :s
Froggtreecomics at 9:57AM, July 16, 2013
7! This is a lovely page, I think your work is strongest when you don't force the perspective/3D'ness of a panel.
Anubis at 3:45AM, July 16, 2013
No one is known to have been there... thats a very different thing than no one was there
plymayer at 1:41AM, July 16, 2013
The way you have her hair, the police woman reminds me of Sergeant Lucy Bates from Hill Street Blues. The dialog works here, the questions would be coming pretty quick.