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usedbooks on Feb. 23, 2007

Ugh… Long explanations. When Bethany read this the first time, she didn't “get it” and had to read it twice over. Oh Bethany… You're Yuki-ness is disturbing.

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InkyMoondrop at 12:46PM, Jan. 11, 2023

Had to google ice timer, but still not sure that's a thing. So bascially two ice blocks that were melting, right? It's a fairly decent idea if we take it for granted she wouldn't regain consciousness in the mean time, but I wonder how would've he explain the locked door. Or did he hide the key with the wife?

usedbooks at 3:12PM, Jan. 11, 2023

I'm sure I stole the idea from a whodunnit. All my ideas are stolen.

Warpedwenger at 9:54PM, Jan. 21, 2009

That's a pretty good conclusion. I'm impressed with your ability to tell an intriguing story using very few pages.

timlight at 10:00PM, Aug. 9, 2007

hmmm...mystery solver

maritalbliss at 1:21PM, July 2, 2007

Ahhh, man...I totally thought it was goin' somewhere else...Love bein' suprised though. I'm hooked. I admit it.

Kristen Gudsnuk at 12:08AM, April 25, 2007

I actually like the long explanations. you're good at coming up with mysteries! ~_~ cool!

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