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usedbooks on July 16, 2007
This page is a few days later (if the dialog doesn't suggest it clearly enough). We can see Seiko smiling again. She's staying with Tristan, which isn't so bad. BTW, this chapter delves into Mike's character a little more. Little punk grows on ya… Everyone picks on Mike, but he's really a good sport about it.
Peipei: Kaida is being a touch more difficult than usual, because Fudo (aka *her* problem) has come after her friends twice. You're right that she lacks good communication skills. Stubborn woman.
LanceDanger: Thanks. My pages are getting better. :)
usedbooks at 3:40PM, Sept. 8, 2007
Thanks for the PQ, Lynn. I got it fixed (not showing my change yet, but it will soon). That was driving me nuts. o.O
usedbooks at 7:04AM, Sept. 6, 2007
TYPOS!? Little bastards must have gotten in under radar! I found and destroyed the one on the last page, but where's the one on this page? (The wording feels a little awkward but I couldn't find any typos. o.O PQ me and I'll fix the bastard!) I added that thing to the top, too. It wasn't until after posting the page that I realized readers might be temporally lost.
maritalbliss at 1:23AM, Sept. 6, 2007
Okay, my first sorta' complaint. On the last page you had a typo and on this page you do too. Watch that kinda' thing, it can really turn off a reader. You might want to consider a narration box if it is a couple of days later, it's an established comic book exposition technique. Otherwise, lucky Seiko.
LanceDanger at 10:53PM, July 17, 2007
Gah! I was not notified it had updated! Silly Drunk Duck and it's bugs XD Cool :)
Peipei at 6:08AM, July 17, 2007
hahahaha that's just so cute :3 one of santa's slaves I see xD