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usedbooks on Nov. 17, 2007
Toyo tosses out another punchline. (He can't help himself, even under these circumstances.) I seriously suck at action, so I had to reference “punching” and spend quite some time on panel 2.
LanceDanger: I'm sure I'll have fun. Thanksgiving is my favorite holiday, and I love hanging out with my dad. ^_^
n_y_japlander: Kaida is having a rough time, but Toyo is taking care of her.
ShinGen: Yeah, she is an angry girl, getting into trouble… (I would have snuck out by now.)
Peipei: Kaida does have a temper and tends to overreact. (teenager… lol)
Tantz: You've got good instincts. This is a shady group.
simonitro at 2:17PM, Jan. 12, 2008
So, those two what pusuited Fudo to start his killing acts.
LanceDanger at 11:46AM, Nov. 18, 2007
"Opportunity at gunpoint? Let me get my resume." PRICELSS! Lol, for some odd reason, if this where to be an animated story or something, Cary Elwes would so rule doing the voice of Toyo XD The second panel came out quite well, though =3
Peipei at 10:25AM, Nov. 18, 2007
Poor Toyo :( He doesnt get to be in the action and get in trouble ; ; I think he is too nice of a guy to be in that kind of stuff, despite his criminal background :3
Tantz_Aerine at 8:41AM, Nov. 18, 2007
Obviously. XD Fudo to the damsel rescue while bare chested? Sure win with teen kaida. XD
ShinGen at 12:46AM, Nov. 18, 2007
Oh wow Fudo laid the smack down on Ringo. Nice work UB. I think I'm beginning to understand Fudo a bit more so now.
hpkomic at 10:29PM, Nov. 17, 2007
Here are a couple action tips for you. When drawing a punch, it's better to not draw the actual connection of fist and face. You'd be better off drawing the fist after it's bounced off the face, and showing the motionlines sweeping past the target of the punch, there's more energy that way. I'm a little shocked you put motion lines on the falling gun, but not on the actual punch.
n_y_japlander at 10:12PM, Nov. 17, 2007
wow... those glasses must be super-glued on... Your action bits look good, I've seen worse!!! So the groosome 3-some started Fudo in contract killing.... still don't know if I agree with his change of work... but... let's see what happens next!