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usedbooks on March 3, 2008
CPR. Yes, there was a tiny bit of hidden foreshadowing last chapter. ;-) As usual, the hands on this page look terrible, and I stumbled all over myself trying to draw CPR positions. But I liked how the last panel turned out. I also liked bringing in Brad's “love confession.” (Not that he's ever been one for subtlety, but he's never actually said it before.)
Hey, page 450. Not a shabby number, but it's not those lovely double zeros. ;-) We made it through the last 50 pages without a single fatality! That won't be the case for the next 50 pages, but I hope you stick around anyway.
LanceDanger: Yuki has a lot of enemies. She's something of a crime-stopping legend.
Tantz: That is one of her degrees, but she hasn't practiced in a while (she was a professor/researcher). Brad is CPR certified, so his training is more useful at the moment.
n_y_japlander: Kaida loves catching scumbags. ;-)
Peipei: She's awake now. ^_^
trev: I'm glad you liked the build-up. Pacing for this chapter was challenging.
amanda: He's using that energy for rescue. Kaida's angry too, though. That can be scarier.
patrickdevine: Yeah, I wasn't happy with that panel inside the car (p 448). I didn't include enough details and was really awkward with perspective/angles.
worstcase: Thanks. ^_^
Ziffy88 at 8:42PM, March 4, 2008
is it just me or is the neck when he's looking down a bit weird...I'm not complaining I'm just saying (hey I'm worst at anatomy that's why pretty much all my panels are at the same angle or angel ah nuts I'm tired...sleeppp
worstcase at 7:23PM, March 4, 2008
awwwwwwwwwwww....I like this. This is cute.
blntmaker at 5:35PM, March 4, 2008
Great build up here in the story! Sugary sweet page here. Once again, I envy your ability as an author. I think you did well capturing the CPR scenes too!
Lonnehart at 4:52PM, March 4, 2008
I'm glad she turned out alive. Now let's hope she is well. And that's one surprise love confession... :)
trevoramueller at 1:45PM, March 4, 2008
Nice dramatic page with a satisfying ending. Love blooms in some of the strangest of places. :D
amanda at 7:52AM, March 4, 2008
Awwwww! That's so sweet ^.^ And now that Yuki's going to be fine, I'm ready for some butt-kicking to begin.
dueeast at 7:08AM, March 4, 2008
I agree with Tantz, panel 3 is great! Very well rendered. And when I finished reading the page, I thought "Awwwwwwww!" (in a cute way)
JustNoPoint at 6:50AM, March 4, 2008
"I love you too" That kinda made me laugh a bit. She probably had the mentality of "Well, I know THIS guy won't try and kill me!" I hope she doesn't use the nice guy as a recover boyfriend till she decides to get in another bad match up. Not that I know a zillion girls that do that or anything... =p
Locoma at 5:41AM, March 4, 2008
ah, the hands are not bad at all, he looks like he's holding her very delicately on third panel but the hands don't look weird or badly drawn. Besides that's the beauty of comicking isn't it? sooner or later you'll have to draw things you're not used to draw
Tantz_Aerine at 4:28AM, March 4, 2008
YOu should be very proud of panel three. I could feel that breath wooshing in her lungs :)
Peipei at 1:20AM, March 4, 2008
Yay! She's okay :3 All cuz of Brad ^^...Although I think that was more of a kiss than a cpr thing xD Regardless, it's good to see Yuki alive and well :)
LanceDanger at 11:05PM, March 3, 2008
Drats, pardon me for double commenting, but for teh second time in a row, I forgot to mention how cool the new banner looks =3
LanceDanger at 11:00PM, March 3, 2008
Awesome page! =D Brad and Yuki, YAY! =3 Now, on to whoever was behind this heinous act (such a bad thing, that it made me say a fancy word and everything! I so rarely ever get an excuse to use that word, "heinous" XD)!
n_y_japlander at 10:47PM, March 3, 2008
(6_6) glad Yuki is OK.... But still gotta get the ScumBag!!! (^O^) Vic, I have no idea what you are talking about?!?!? the hands on this page are spot on! I love the way the 3rd panel came out! Be proud!! (^O^)