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usedbooks on March 10, 2008
When I originally thought of this little flashback story, it was from Kaida/Fudo's perspective. I pictured Kaida answering her phone and Fudo taking it away from her to talk to “the boss.” Of course, when it came to presenting this story, I had to alter everything. None of the facts changed, but I realized that only Raidon would be able to tell the story. It was somewhat challenging, but I think the story works even better from Raidon's perspective. (And it gives us important insight into his motives and personality.)
LanceDanger: Lol. You and your pop culture references. ;-)
Peipei: They did/do? have a bit of a rivalry. Not a good situation for a couple “dangerous men.”
Tantz: XD Yes…
Locoma: Yeah, that's Fudo. He has more outfits/appearance changes than most of the other characters – which is good for a fugitive.
JustNoPoint: Complex is an understatement. Lol. They do have an interesting past. These flashbacks are probably my favorite parts of the story.
patrickdevine at 6:20PM, March 11, 2008
Who waits for five hours and thinks that whoever's going to show up? Creepy stalker-ish types I guess...
trevoramueller at 10:03AM, March 11, 2008
The plot thickens...duh duh DUH!
amanda at 7:44AM, March 11, 2008
Oh man...this could get ugly.
Peipei at 2:43AM, March 11, 2008
Ooooo! Not good. Not good at all xD...I feel it would probably be disturbing for Fudo to pick up the answer instead of Kaida...That usually is a tell tale sign that someone is "fooling around" hehehe :3
ghostrunner at 11:05PM, March 10, 2008
man on the run i take it?
LanceDanger at 10:49PM, March 10, 2008
Wow, he must've really had a soft spot for her if he waited five hours, I have to give him props for that, at least 0_o I think it's coming out quite lovely coming from that silly Raidon's point of view =D
Locoma at 10:12PM, March 10, 2008
aaahh! I wish I was "late" again so I would have a whole bunch of updates to read :P haha