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usedbooks on March 20, 2008

Ugh. I hate the panel layout on this page. It turned out to be a case of not being able to capture the picture in my head. In retrospect, I could have done it much better, maybe over two pages. (Bad, Vickie! Cramming in all the speech and thought bubbles!) I guess I got ahead of myself with this scene. I fixed it up a bit from the original (yes, it was worse). I think the decreasing font sizes really helped the effect of that last line.

Locoma: Need a tissue? This scene is pretty much over now. Like my new avatar? XD

LanceDanger: No one ever listens to the cat. -_-

ghostrunner: It's a hell of a timer.

n_y_japlander: Fudo is pretty messed up. Going to great lengths to be left alone with his madness.

Molly: Definitely not a nice guy… He's very difficult.

Peipei: Seiko slightly overestimated his humanity, I'm afraid.

dueeast: Thanks. This page isn't so great. I needed to keep the scene short but was having a major pacing problem.

JustNoPoint: Yeah, I wanted to focus on Seiko's reaction when she was stabbed. It was hard to get the angle to work. My friend Bethany was “shocked” at Fudo's actions in this chapter. “Really?” I told her “'Shocked?' What story have you been reading, Bethany?”

amanda: This might be their most candid discussion ever – though it took some extra effort on Seiko's part. :-/

trevor: Cameo? Fun. – Not that the dead can't have cameos, but we'll see what happens.

patrickdevine: It doesn't pay to help people who don't want help…