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usedbooks on April 3, 2012

This page and the previous one were heavy on dialogue. It became a challenge to balance the speech with the artwork and still maintain flow. I guess that can't be helped with conclusion pages. (One more page to go in this arc!)

Tristan seems almost out of character here He isn't usually the type to speak-up. But somehow, it fits. Actually, he has been much bolder recently, and it all comes very natural when I'm writing, so I haven't noticed. Go figure.

Anubis: He got lucky this time. One generally should not backtalk police officers, especially ones who are substituting lectures for tickets…

plymayer: Thanks!

LanceDanger & ghostrunner: He's stepping up. :)

crazy_goodfellow: In my original script, I listed things, but it was way too text-heavy. Anyway, it included “speeding, obstruction of justice, driving without a license, carrying a loaded firearm.”

Tantz: Thanks. :) They're interactions come pretty naturally. It's much easier to write/draw than I thought.