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usedbooks on Dec. 9, 2013
My script had the line in panel 4 read “But they break so easily.” I changed it to “quickly” because it seemed more sinister. I keep making minor dialogue changes like that, but I think each one is a truer reflection of character. You'd be surprised at how much time I spend fretting over single words or phrasings and all their connotations and implications. (Tantz knows because if it eats at me long enough, I end up emailing her with my petty wording conflicts. :P )
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Anubis: That it is!
Peipei: Even if she is momentarily scared, it's never wise to piss Kaida off and then turn your back on her.
plymayer: I have a flip phone too. No nonsense. :)
Peipei at 6:02PM, Dec. 10, 2013
Finally xD! I would empty it on him anyway, just as punishment for his lack of respect for these ladies. xD
Anubis at 8:24AM, Dec. 10, 2013
I hope that wasnt a warning shot in the air.. on in the shoulder to get him to lessen his grip... then mayhaps empty the clip into his vitals
plymayer at 9:58PM, Dec. 9, 2013
I hope she put at least that one into him.