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usedbooks on Dec. 16, 2013
This is the last page of the chapter. I did my best to fit in all necessary dialogue. This is much different than my original script. I originally planned for Kaida to have only a brief line or two following Valentine's exit, and the last page was the police and paramedics on scene. I decided to cut that. (I'm conflicted about it because I do like Tara, and Valentine is her number one case/mission at the moment.) In that script, Kaida mentions that she wishes she has shot Valentine in the head, and Tara says she thinks she'd have been justified. (Tara is a spiteful, stubborn person you don't want to get on the wrong side of.) It was a good exchange, but I have to lose things like that in rewrites.
plymayer: True. Maybe if she didn't have to worry about roommate, she could have held him for the police (or laid him out flat).
Anubis: So it does. Looks like getting shot at is a routine he's familiar with. :P
Peipei: Lol. She has Kaida, but apparently she's less of a bodyguard and more of a trouble magnet.
Peipei at 6:31PM, Dec. 17, 2013
Hmm I would think that Kaida would try to keep a lower profile, just to prevent getting her friends involved with her past business. She should lay low and avoid the book store so she doesn't put the people she cares about in harm's way x.x.
Anubis at 7:15PM, Dec. 16, 2013
i see tha request being ignored
plymayer at 5:49AM, Dec. 16, 2013
Her professional training is kicking in as should happen in deadly/dangerous situations. She is calm and thinking things through.