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usedbooks on Jan. 14, 2016
I did my best with the dialogue. It was tricky to get the conversation across naturally. Alex came out again as more pissed off than sad/scared. I scripted him originally as more of a panicked guy, but when it got down to it, he just got really angry. I don’t know exactly how the writing evolves like that, but I guess it works. (Maybe I was working on more divergence between Mike and Alex. Mike has a professed anger problem but mostly gets sad because he’s afraid of losing control. By contrast, Alex doesn’t fear his anger.)
tupapayon: Indeed.
KimLuster: Thanks. I get along okay with proto-humans. But I like to give them back to their parents before the novelty wears off.
Anubis: Baby is sleeping! Be courteous, and use a silencer.
Peipei: Three individuals were shot (Mike, Puck, and Cass), so there were three shooters. (Cass and Derek should be in custody, so only Cass’s attacker is at large – in addition to Gibson and Val.)
plymayer: Four of my cousins have offspring. I have animals.
ghostrunner: When he levels up, he should take a quick-reload skill.
Peipei at 9:27PM, Jan. 17, 2016
I could only imagine how he would feel just as a family member. I do wonder if she's alright, or alive at the very least.
plymayer at 10:26PM, Jan. 14, 2016
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KimLuster at 7:32PM, Jan. 14, 2016
you're doing a great job with the frenzied feel of all the chaos that's been going on!!
Anubis at 2:42PM, Jan. 14, 2016
get there fast!
Tantz_Aerine at 8:46AM, Jan. 14, 2016
Anger can stem from panic very often.
ghostrunner at 8:32AM, Jan. 14, 2016
yeah, give her the chair
tupapayon at 7:59AM, Jan. 14, 2016
Doing it with or without your help...