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usedbooks on Dec. 9, 2019
Thank you once again for your patience. I hope you are having a lovely December so far.
My script went through quite a number of changes, as it always does. Basically, I start with fragments that don't fit together, and I alter them until I achieve coherence. My first script for this scene had Tara in it to receive Mike's info. But Tara would not make a good escort because Tara is a highly professional and perceptive detective. Brad relies on the illusion of incompetence, and he wears it well.
Peipei at 8:33PM, Dec. 9, 2019
Looks like he might've been a little too busy thinking of Yuki again to bother getting a good look at who the person was. Thorough police work there, Officer Lane xD!
usedbooks at 5:33AM, Dec. 10, 2019
Lol. In this town, willful ignorance is a safety measure. XD -- Though not the best quality in law enforcement.
man in black at 4:35PM, Dec. 9, 2019
Great page
usedbooks at 6:15PM, Dec. 9, 2019
Thanks!
plymayer at 4:29PM, Dec. 9, 2019
A bit of over thinking on his part.
usedbooks at 6:15PM, Dec. 9, 2019
Mike? He thinks a lot. Lol. But he is pretty sure he found a murder scene, so better to tell someone.
Tantz_Aerine at 4:13PM, Dec. 9, 2019
Great page this one, love the balloon placement and the last two panels. You're ever improving!
usedbooks at 6:14PM, Dec. 9, 2019
Thanks! One of my thoughts was to have Mike holding the ax (bot not on the snowmobile). This worked.