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usedbooks on April 18, 2022
I'm relatively happy with how the page turned out. Somehow, all the imagery was very clear in my mind's eye and found its way to the paper. I guess that's something others experience more often, but I don't usually visualize things that way. (My brain is words, not pictures.)
This script has changed drastically from first draft. My original plan was an all-out melee battle showing what a badass action hero Misaki was. I couldn't make it fit, and, ultimately, I figured *not* being an action hero has badass points too.
Locoma at 9:12PM, July 18, 2022
this is really intense!!!! I LOVE the lighting!
usedbooks at 3:33AM, July 19, 2022
Thanks!
KAM at 3:19AM, April 19, 2022
Soooo... she's hoping he's "the one that got away"? ;-)
usedbooks at 6:55AM, April 19, 2022
I strive to always be the one that got away.
man in black at 7:32PM, April 18, 2022
Uh oh
usedbooks at 6:54AM, April 19, 2022
Indeed. :/
Tantz_Aerine at 4:45AM, April 18, 2022
They're wasting their ammo. Excellent page :)
usedbooks at 5:00AM, April 18, 2022
Thanks! Yep, a large tree makes a decent shield.
plymayer at 1:01AM, April 18, 2022
Bad to worse. She has the advantage. Nothing to loose.
usedbooks at 4:59AM, April 18, 2022
True. Stakes are very different for these parties.