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usedbooks on April 1, 2024
Gibson has been doing a little sleuthing. I had a hard time abridging dialogue. I ended up summarizing his actions with, “I've seen what I needed to see.” I had considered having him mention other things like noticing Richard did laundry. It didn't add enough to the story to take up space/time with Gibson's observations. – It was hard enough to fit the dialogue that I did. :P
Gibson's accusations are the most important part of the conversation, and those are at least partly instinct. I intended to write him as both observant and a good judge of character. (In other words, he has had Richard under scrutiny from the start.)
Tantz_Aerine at 3:45AM, April 4, 2024
You might want to prove that though.
usedbooks at 9:09AM, April 4, 2024
If you're a bad guy, you don't have to prove anything. XD But you should, lest other bad guys think you're mean (or if you have to report to a bad guy supervisor).
plymayer at 1:31PM, April 2, 2024
But I doubt he is completely convinced either way.
usedbooks at 1:57PM, April 2, 2024
When you're called, you can fold or double down.
man in black at 6:24PM, April 1, 2024
Him? Noooo
usedbooks at 6:45AM, April 2, 2024
He's so honest and cooperative!